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a shine and a song. by ~iLISI:iconiLISI:



she is a daughter and a matchbox woman, hard until you strike her and
she ignites. she is a daughter and she is not meant to drown today and
death with his square toes will not count her among his prizes.

she learns to grieve in whatever skin she's wearing
and the angels cannot smother her shine, cannot
silence her song

though they tied the horizon
round her neck and bent her back with the weight of heaven.

hers is an albatross named beauty draped across her spine but she does not drag her wrists.  she is misled and misloved, she is
ten feet tall; she is strong enough to sing again.
©2009 ~iLISI
:iconilisi:

Author's Comments

"when god had made the man, he made him out of stuff that sung all the time and glittered all over. then after that some angels got jealous and chopped him into millions of pieces, but still he glittered and hummed. so they beat him down to nothing but sparks but each little spark had a shine and a song."

hurston.

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:iconesotericheart:
I think this is absolutely fantastic.
:iconilisi:
thank you so much (:
i wanted it to be INCREDDDDIBLE
because it's part of my ap lang final project...
yikesss!

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:icontrauermei:
Great poem. I loved your images. ^^
:iconeternalember:
OMFG. I loooove this!!

Those last three stanzas my eyes just kept getting bigger. XD

"bent her back with the weight of heaven."- damn. O.O

And yay, you used one of my favorite words, albatross. X3

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*****
✶ When you grow up, your heart d i e s. ✶

Heaven's not a place that you go when you die.
It's that moment in life when you actually feel
alive ✩
:iconlostwithindreams:
you're a genius.
great piece and wonderful work (as per usual).

if you wrote a book, i would totally buy it. <3333


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:iconilisi:
thank you!
<3

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconilisi:
i love that book (:
have you read it?

<3
(albatross is my very favourite word!)

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconilisi:
i plan to write a book (:
someday

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconlostwithindreams:
and i plan to buy it and thoroughly enjoy it
someday.


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:iconjuiceforjuggernauts:
I'm in love for that reason!

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