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exquisite fell from your lips, apple from a
tree proving gravity pulled the carpet out
from underneath and i will deny that it was
love spreading his seeds.  i cupped the light
from your eyes in my palms, held the brightest
parts of you for the world to see.

i hope the mirror tells you what i know, hope
it shows you that you are just as delicately
entrancing in the darkroom as in the bleached glow
of copper sun.  bijou-darling, waste away with me.

the weight of a crown cannot hold you close;
passion coruscation cannot tie you down.
a pearl is a grain of sand but you are priceless,
a diamond solitaire lovelier than the silver that
hems you in.  i will buy you a glass carousel

so that we can travel forever and forget
that we aren't going anywhere at all.
©2009 ~iLISI
:iconilisi:

Author's Comments

"begin at the beginning and go on
till you come to the end: then stop."

a billet-doux for :iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
who got my five thousandth pageview.
and who happens to be the love of my life,okay.
<3

[link] my "official" five thousand.
which i scribbled on,because i can.
get over it.

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:iconthat-hippie-kid:
very very well done :heart:

--
we're going down, down
in an earlier round and
sugar we're going down swinging
:iconilisi:
thank you <3

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconthat-hippie-kid:
your welcome <3

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we're going down, down
in an earlier round and
sugar we're going down swinging
:iconmasa-chan:
Augh, this one made me well up.

Beauty, beauty, beauty.

:heart:

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Cuckuhim 'o 'ab him.
Wepeghim 'o 'abai him.
:iconrainydaysmile:
i will buy you a glass carousel

so that we can travel forever and forget
that we aren't going anywhere at all.


You...

You, you, you.

Your talent is incredible.

I'd come up with something more clever or poetic, but I'm a little dazed.

--
They search for the method in our madness while we dare them to find the madness in our method.
:iconilisi:
youyouyou!

dazed is fun when you're
on a merry-go-round or
playing video games.

you are infinitely clever and poetic.
i assure you.
(:

--
let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconilisi:
i'm sorry.
but thank you (:
<3

--
let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconrainydaysmile:
hahah--this is your poem! i'm supposed to compliment you, not the other way around.

hah.

thanks, it's nice to hear/read that.

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They search for the method in our madness while we dare them to find the madness in our method.
:iconstop-drop-n-roll:
Wow, the glass carousel line... that was so... is it ok to have no words left after that?

--
"I just had five hot dogs."

"Five hot dogs?"

"FIVE HOT DOGS!!!"
:iconilisi:
no,you're not.

and even if that were so,
my rules are backwards.

so there.

--
let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet

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