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left-handed lightbulbs. by ~iLISI:iconiLISI:



today i take
the train into
my city and it is

underwater.



                     anna

says the birds are
leaving because here
is the wrong place


to be, and i think that maybe
it has more to do
with altitude and potential

for greatness.
no one looks in graveyards
for nobel prize winners.





today i pack
up and stay
here.  




today i

take my train to
atlantis and follow
the silence to

patched-up
tomorrow


                    anna
is knitting sweaters
to keep the sparrows
warm


           anna worries
about

things like
dog-eared
pages

and left-
handed
scissors





i say


the train
tracks
will run out

long before
the earth lets
go of your ankles.



today i saw
fish tanks piled
in my cardboard

boxes;




today i pack
up the
quiet and

commandeer
a cable
car





no tracks
but here we still
run in


circles
©2009 ~iLISI
:iconilisi:

Author's Comments

i can't take this silence anymore,



anymore

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:iconbeautiful-shadows:
Are you out of school yet?
:iconilisi:
nope

i'm supposed to be working on a world history project right now

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconpen-and-ink-45301:
yet again, another powerful, emotive piece.
it fits well with this sense I have of wanting to leave, to be somewhere else, to get up and go . . . and yet, to also sort of want to just hang around even though I know I'm not where I want to be. it's got a very forlorn, yearning, in-between-time feel to it.

it's been raining here for too long. but my city isn't flooded yet.

--
"You know, you and I are like crystal. Most people are just glass. The world sings a note to them and they can't feel it. But we hum. But you have to be careful. You have to know when to stop humming, because crystal will shatter."
-Brian Hall
:iconilisi:
it's a rainy-day poem

i keep editing the formatting slightly
i should really stop

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconbeautiful-shadows:
I always procrastinate on history projects..actually I procrastinate on everything.
:iconilisi:
you are not alone

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:iconbeautiful-shadows:
That is reasurring. I think I spelt that wrong. I should buy a dictionary. Yeah..I am really bored. I really shouldn't be commenting like this on your deviation.LOL I'll stop.
:iconilisi:
reassuring (:
<-- spellingfreak.

<3

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:iconbeautiful-shadows:
Wow. My spelling makes me sound drunk. Woops. okay this is the last one promise.
:iconilisi:
haha no, it's really not that bad

i've seen words butchered

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